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Author: snowkit12 Date: 03-21-2008 Title of Book: book the being Announcement from the Author: I just started writing this book I hope you like it alot if people real a joy it I will make the second story maybe
DARK SHADOWS
DARK SHADOWS
THE BEING
By: Katie Hillner Prologue
A holly bush A fox Darkens Shadows Blood will be spilled twice but be only stain once one will died and the rest will live as a legend. “Are you sure he’s the one” said a dark pelt tom “yes I’m sure” answer a beautiful white pelt she-cat “ok Whitesnow” said the dark the pelt cat "I I’m sure Blackpelt” said Whitesnow “the leader is my sister Blackpelt and the deputy is your brother and his mate is sightstar sister don’t worried” said Whitesnow “I hope you are right Whitesnow” said Blackpelt.CHAPTER ONE
“Shadowkit where are you” yelled Darkkit “right here Darkkit” said shadowkit popping out behind a bush by the nursery “don’t do that shadowkit” said Darkkit “fine but it was funny to see your face” said shadowkit. Then Clawtail walked out for the nursery with Hollykit, Tawnykit and Foxkit Darkkit sisters then Darkkit ran up to his mom and said “shadowkit is being mean to me and I told him to stop and he wouldn’t.” whined Darkkit Clawtail walked up to Shadowkit and said “Shadowkit don’t you have better things to do then to scared Darkkit” Asked Clawtail “my mom is out hunting I’m waiting for her” answer shadowkit “you do that” said Clawtail then backend with her tail for kits to follow her back to the nursery. It was sunhigh when his mom came in to the clearing with some fresh-kill then she saw him she padded up to him “how are you doing my brave son” asked Dawncloud then Yellowpelt his father and deputy of Iceclan “I have been looking for you all over camp for you Dawncloud.” Said Yellowpelt “well I’m here now aren’t I Yellowpelt oh here comes Lightingstar.” Said Dawncloud “hello Dawncloud Yellowpelt oh Yellowpelt did you organizes all the patrol’s?” asked Lightingstar “yes I did Lightingstar If I didn’t do you think I would be over here at all?” said Yellowpelt “True Yellowpelt very good and Dawncloud I need to talk to you and Clawtail will you get her for my” asked Lightingstar “Yes I will Lightingstar” said Dawncloud then she walked into the nursery to get Clawtail. When Clawtail, Dawncloud and Yellowpelt came out for Lightingstar den Clawtail what to talked to her kits and Dawncloud and Yellowpelt can walking over to Shadowkit “shadowkit you and Clawtail kits will be made apprentices at moonhigh.” Said Yellowpelt and then Dawncloud and Yellowpelt walked off. ~ ~ ~CHAPTER TWO
It was moonhigh when Lightingstar called the clan to the high tree Dawncloud and Clawtail’s kits walked out for the nursery and what to stand in front of Iceclan and the high tree then Lightingstar started the ceremony to make them apprentices “Darkkit, Tawnykit, Hollykit, Foxkit and shadowkit do you promise to up hold the Iceclan warriors codes?” asked Lightingstar then all the kits answer “we do!” “Then till you get your warriors name I give you your names” said Lightingstar she jump down for the high tree she what to Darkkit first “Darkkit for now on you will be known as darkpaw” then she rest hr muzzle on his shoulder “Hollykit you will be known as hollypaw” she rest her muzzle on her shoulder “Tawnykit for on you will be known as tawnypaw” she rested her muzzle of her “Foxkit for now on you will be known as foxpaw” she then also rested her muzzle on her shoulder “shadowkit for now on you will be known as shadowpaw” then last she rested her muzzle on his shoulder then yelled “Yellowpelt Dawncloud Birchtree Leaffur and Blackface come forward” said Lightingstar then the cats she had called came forward “Yellowpelt you will be motor to foxpaw” Yellowpelt came forward to touch nose with her “Dawncloud you will be motor tawnypaw” then Dawncloud came forward to do the same thing that Yellowpelt did “Leaffur you will be motor shadowpaw” then she walked up to him and did the same thing “Birchtree you will motor hollypaw” he walked up to her and did the something “and last be less blackface you will motor darkpaw” he walked up and touch nose with him then they walked back to the clan the clan was calling their new names “hollypaw darkpaw foxpaw tawnypaw shadowpaw” the clan yelled and chant ~ ~ ~CHAPTER THREE
It was sunhigh and shadowpaw, hollypaw, foxpaw, and tawnypaw where at the snowy hill for hunting training while darkpaw was out getting a tour of iceclan’s territory they all ready had the tour of the territory yesterday “shadowpaw pay attained” yelled Leaffur his motor she was teaching him a hunting crouch for hunting a mouse. “Now you try shadowpaw” said Leaffur shadowpaw crouch down and put all his weight on his back paws then he moved forward and jumped on stick he pretend it was a mouse. “Very good shadowpaw you what to try it on a real mouse” said Leaffur “yes I would Leaffur I real do what too” said the excite apprentice. They walked into the camp and brought their fresh-kill to the elders like their motor darkpaw was walking into camp when the four apprentice had just sat down with their prey “did you have fun darkpaw?” asked hollypaw “yes and I saw a caveclan patrol’s.” said darkpaw “we saw a snowclan patrol yesterday” said shadowpaw “err why do you guys see all the cool stuff before me” yelled the mad apprentice “clam down darkpaw take it easy” said foxpaw “so what did you do while I was out” asked darkpaw “we practice are hunting crouch and then got to go hunting for real foxpaw caught the most five mousses three birds and seven thrush today” said shadowpaw foxpaw looked happily at shadowpaw and he smiled back at her. Darkpaw was in a real bad mood and he also thought that shadowpaw and his sister foxpaw like each other then he thought again well duh they like each other as “friends” then he felt a little better. ~ ~ ~CHAPTER FOUR
Shadowpaw had just got back for a hunting patrol with his motor Leaffur and foxpaw with her motor Yellowpelt they had caught four mouse’s, twelve birds and seventeen rabbits they had put their kill in the fresh-kill pile because the elders had all ready been feed. The clan had a fest because all the fresh-kill the newly apprentice had caught darkpaw hadn’t talked to them because he was learn how to do the hunters crouch today he was a day behind them in training because they got the tour of their territory’s they your made apprentices while darkpaw motor helped him find a nest in the apprentices den because he thought he my had a problem. Leaffur asked him to take some fresh-kill to her sister who was their medicine cat she was blind but love the small of the herbs she had the best nose because she was blind and had to scent things out “Treebark are you in here?” asked shadowpaw who had standing in the mouth of the medicine cat den “shadowpaw what do you need?” asked Treebark as she walked out for the back of the den where all the herbs where at “I bought you some fresh-kill” answer shadowpaw Treebark’s eyes meet his her eyes where the lightest blue eyes he had ever seen “thank you shadowpaw and let me guesses it’s a rabbit and a big one at that” reply Treebark “correct it is a big one and it is a rabbit” said shadowpaw “well I have to get going Treebark” said shadowpaw “oh and shadows thank you for the rabbit” said as shadowpaw was walking out of the mouth of the den then he turn to her then said “shadow’s I like that name” “do you now” said Treebark “yes” replied shadowpaw “let’s keep it a secret between us as like a nickname” said shadowpaw “I like that idea what will be my secret nickname shadows” said Treebark “let me see” said shadow’s “I got it’s tree do you like it” asked shadows “yes I do shadows oh here comes my sister shadows” said Treebark “now remember tell no one about this it’s are secret got it trees” asked shadows “yes I do shadows” and then Leaffur walked into the mouth of the den “shadowpaw go get so fresh-kill I think you don’t need to bother my sister now do you?” asked Leaffur “no I don’t Leaffur” answer shadowpaw and walked with his down “oh Leaffur he wasn’t doing anything wrong we were just talking” said Treebark in shadowpaw defends “ok I got to go on a patrol so I should be going bye Treebark” said Leaffur “be safe” yelled Treebark as her sister walked out of the den.CHAPTER FIVE
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